literature

My Eyes Adored You: Introduction

Deviation Actions

Swimmerchick58's avatar
Published:
550 Views

Literature Text

It all started the day she saved him from that incident in the river. He remembered that day with such vibrant clarity, both due to the nature of his near death experience and the prospect a new-found friendship that had emerged out of that faithful day. For you see, the Lorax's plan to safely sail the Once-ler out of the valley, had well... gone kind of awry. Instead of using his bed to sail him down the river and out of the valley, the Once-ler found himself bobbing  amongst the white waters of the river. Struggling to keep his head above the water the Once-ler saw a shadowy enter the water and make its way towards him, as the darkness engulfed his senses.  Suddenly, he was pulled away from a blinding light and from out of the darkness his eyes opened to revealed to her face. That was all it took. From that day the two developed a mutual friendship, that has blossomed into something more.
(Planning to make this into a series of 3 drabble oneshots featuring young-Once-ler, greedy-Once-ler, and finally old-Once-ler. This is just the setup so be on the lookout for more.
© 2012 - 2024 Swimmerchick58
Comments2
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
Undreamtstories's avatar
I really like this. You have a great way with words.
However you should change the 'It all started the day she saved him'